First Kiss



In the midst of our talk,
You seemed to glow, like heaven-sent,
You seemed so close that,
I felt the warmth, that your heart lent.
You smiled and winked, I took a breath.
I heard your heart, Beat in your chest.
Short I was in your warm embrace,
I felt a touch so soft and tender.
You leaned over and kissed me,
With a passion flowing free.
I leaned towards you,and closed my eyes.
I felt my knees go weak.
It made me feel , so reassured.
You left me wanting more,
And my soul free of pain .




Written for Gooseberry Garden and Thursday poets rally

12 comments:

Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/ said...

This is a nice write; very visual and sensual, yet innocent at the same time. Very nice.

My entry: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/28/forever-changed-2/

Daydreamertoo said...

We never forget our first kiss, especilly if we have fallen for the person. Lovely, gentle, and sensual.

Pat-Mather Brown Gordon-ceton said...

powerful and raw!

Ann LeFlore said...

Very powerful and I totally enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for submitting your peom . My entry this week is http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/08/29/the-one-and-only-kiss

Maggie said...

Oh, yeah. Weak knees, indeed. Brings me back... : )

Anonymous said...

Hmmm, the joy of a first kiss. Nicely captured in this poem.
Beautiful!

Blaga said...

Sweet, memorable as every first kiss!

Anonymous said...

nice.. my entry if you have time.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2009/11/24/fluttering-in-an-envelope/

Anonymous said...

I held my breath through this lovely poem...what a pleasant experience revisited! Thank-you!

Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry said...

lovely,

enjoyed your imagery,

Nithin said...

it looked so real..the imagary just sprayed in air..touching n romantic.. nice poem.

Anonymous said...

What a beautiful and passionate piece of art.

JP

http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/09/01/ive-got-you/