First Kiss



In the midst of our talk,
You seemed to glow, like heaven-sent,
You seemed so close that,
I felt the warmth, that your heart lent.
You smiled and winked, I took a breath.
I heard your heart, Beat in your chest.
Short I was in your warm embrace,
I felt a touch so soft and tender.
You leaned over and kissed me,
With a passion flowing free.
I leaned towards you,and closed my eyes.
I felt my knees go weak.
It made me feel , so reassured.
You left me wanting more,
And my soul free of pain .




Written for Gooseberry Garden and Thursday poets rally

12 comments:

Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/ said...

This is a nice write; very visual and sensual, yet innocent at the same time. Very nice.

My entry: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/28/forever-changed-2/

Daydreamertoo said...

We never forget our first kiss, especilly if we have fallen for the person. Lovely, gentle, and sensual.

The Orange Tree said...

powerful and raw!

Ann LeFlore said...

Very powerful and I totally enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for submitting your peom . My entry this week is http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/08/29/the-one-and-only-kiss

thingy said...

Oh, yeah. Weak knees, indeed. Brings me back... : )

dandylion28 said...

Hmmm, the joy of a first kiss. Nicely captured in this poem.
Beautiful!

Blaga said...

Sweet, memorable as every first kiss!

fiveloaf said...

nice.. my entry if you have time.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2009/11/24/fluttering-in-an-envelope/

sillyfrogsusan said...

I held my breath through this lovely poem...what a pleasant experience revisited! Thank-you!

Morning said...

lovely,

enjoyed your imagery,

Nithin said...

it looked so real..the imagary just sprayed in air..touching n romantic.. nice poem.

tasithoughts said...

What a beautiful and passionate piece of art.

JP

http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/09/01/ive-got-you/