Love is a stranger

You came as a wishful dreams Or were they nightmares, now I wonder?

They were lovely while they lasted,
The embrace, the caress, the affection, the love,
So innocent, so pure, so divine,
You were a sweetheart,
You had such a magical aura, a spark which made me wallow in your love for a moment,
Hope it lasted forever,
you were here to pacify all my pain,

But it is was over now, all that is left is intense longing,
A sense of loss,
Something so close to the heart is gone,

In the drain of pain, If I ever find rain, for you are long gone,
Away for a long time, from my memories, from my embraces, from my heart, from my eyes,

But It is not gone,
It was never there to be gone,
It never existed,
Except in the dream,

you are a stranger,
your love was a stranger,
you invaded my dreams with all the pure love you had to give,

I now sit longing for you,
For you brings solace, the heart's embrace’ comfort,
For you bring the rains, to wash away the stains of the previous you for a new me,

Oh dream oh dream, rain on me, again
The wait for the next dream for You to appear will be long and it pains.

15 comments:

venkat said...

Hachico ... superbly written.. would want to know more about your dream world .. keep writing ..

subbu said...

There is dignity in suffering; nobility in pain; but failure is a salted wound, that burns and burns again !

K McGee said...

Dreams can be intoxicating.

Jingle said...

beautiful.

you have amazing imaginations.
welcome to poets rally.

Happy Mother's Day to Moms around you. Blessings..

Jingle said...

beautiful.

you have amazing imaginations.
welcome to poets rally.

Happy Mother's Day to Moms around you. Blessings..

Salem Lorot said...

First time on your blog and this is amazing. You write so effortlessly and capture multi-layered feelings. You make me happy and sad at the same time. :)

Isabel said...

wow. love love this poem of dreaming to be with someone.

Andy said...

What a beautiful write.
Sometimes, it's better to live in dreams than to face a harsh reality.
Well done!

Henry Clemmons said...

In the drain of pain. Great line. Great write.

Meiro said...

Love the last two lines.
Lovely written.

mindlovemisery said...

Beautiful and heart-wrenching.

funnygirllola said...

I hope for you that you did experiance this love and this pain. But, if you have not, then it is a wonderful dream even in it's pain

amazingmetamorphosis said...

so hauntingly beautiful. an absolute tear jerker piece. i love it completely.

saya said...

@KMcGee yes very true..
@Jingle Thanks :)
@Salem Lorot thanks for visiting my blog.. And I am happy that I could make someone feel good through my poetry..

saya said...

@isabel and henry thanks for your lovely comments :)
@Andy yes perfectly said:)
@meiro and mindlovemisery I am glad you liked it..
@lola thanks a lot :)