You came as a wishful dreams Or were they nightmares, now I wonder?
They were lovely while they lasted,
The embrace, the caress, the affection, the love,
So innocent, so pure, so divine,
You were a sweetheart,
You had such a magical aura, a spark which made me wallow in your love for a moment,
Hope it lasted forever,
you were here to pacify all my pain,
But it is was over now, all that is left is intense longing,
A sense of loss,
Something so close to the heart is gone,
In the drain of pain, If I ever find rain, for you are long gone,
Away for a long time, from my memories, from my embraces, from my heart, from my eyes,
But It is not gone,
It was never there to be gone,
It never existed,
Except in the dream,
you are a stranger,
your love was a stranger,
you invaded my dreams with all the pure love you had to give,
I now sit longing for you,
For you brings solace, the heart's embrace’ comfort,
For you bring the rains, to wash away the stains of the previous you for a new me,
Oh dream oh dream, rain on me, again
The wait for the next dream for You to appear will be long and it pains.
15 comments:
Hachico ... superbly written.. would want to know more about your dream world .. keep writing ..
There is dignity in suffering; nobility in pain; but failure is a salted wound, that burns and burns again !
Dreams can be intoxicating.
beautiful.
you have amazing imaginations.
welcome to poets rally.
Happy Mother's Day to Moms around you. Blessings..
beautiful.
you have amazing imaginations.
welcome to poets rally.
Happy Mother's Day to Moms around you. Blessings..
First time on your blog and this is amazing. You write so effortlessly and capture multi-layered feelings. You make me happy and sad at the same time. :)
wow. love love this poem of dreaming to be with someone.
What a beautiful write.
Sometimes, it's better to live in dreams than to face a harsh reality.
Well done!
In the drain of pain. Great line. Great write.
Love the last two lines.
Lovely written.
Beautiful and heart-wrenching.
I hope for you that you did experiance this love and this pain. But, if you have not, then it is a wonderful dream even in it's pain
so hauntingly beautiful. an absolute tear jerker piece. i love it completely.
@KMcGee yes very true..
@Jingle Thanks :)
@Salem Lorot thanks for visiting my blog.. And I am happy that I could make someone feel good through my poetry..
@isabel and henry thanks for your lovely comments :)
@Andy yes perfectly said:)
@meiro and mindlovemisery I am glad you liked it..
@lola thanks a lot :)
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