First Kiss

In the midst of our talk,
You seemed to glow, like heaven-sent,
You seemed so close that,
I felt the warmth, that your heart lent.
You smiled and winked, I took a breath.
I heard your heart, Beat in your chest.
Short I was in your warm embrace,
I felt a touch so soft and tender.
You leaned over and kissed me,
With a passion flowing free.
I leaned towards you,and closed my eyes.
I felt my knees go weak.
It made me feel , so reassured.
You left me wanting more,
And my soul free of pain .

Written for Gooseberry Garden and Thursday poets rally


Marbles in My Pocket said...

This is a nice write; very visual and sensual, yet innocent at the same time. Very nice.

My entry:

Daydreamertoo said...

We never forget our first kiss, especilly if we have fallen for the person. Lovely, gentle, and sensual.

Pat-Mather Brown Gordon-ceton said...

powerful and raw!

Ann LeFlore said...

Very powerful and I totally enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for submitting your peom . My entry this week is

Maggie said...

Oh, yeah. Weak knees, indeed. Brings me back... : )

Anonymous said...

Hmmm, the joy of a first kiss. Nicely captured in this poem.

Blaga said...

Sweet, memorable as every first kiss!

Anonymous said...

nice.. my entry if you have time..

Anonymous said...

I held my breath through this lovely poem...what a pleasant experience revisited! Thank-you!

Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry said...


enjoyed your imagery,

Nithin said...

it looked so real..the imagary just sprayed in air..touching n romantic.. nice poem.

Anonymous said...

What a beautiful and passionate piece of art.