Just fear

The fear races through my mind,
aching my heart for the alarm of it,
making my emotions difficult to capture,
causing my eyes cry painfully,
and making life more miserable to lead.
           Fear

           Fear

           Fear

           I ask,
Is there no escape ?
no doors to walk out of ?
no windows to go through ?

Of the wide world I stand alone, and think
Is there a way to cease my fear ???????



18 comments:

Dave King said...

You capture very well the angst of many these days. Well done.

The Noiseless Cuckooclock said...

vivid capture of fears.

lovely job.

The Cello Strings said...

powerful emotions, well done.

Daydreamertoo said...

Yes there is a way, you face what it is that you fear.
Sad, powerful.

charleslmashburn said...

Fear is a choice, not an emotion. Choose no to be afraid. Very good writing.

My poem this week: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/25/she-sat-alone-2/

fiveloaf said...

good question- discarding your timid self and do not be overtly concern about what others say and think of you is the way out of fear i think! glad to be of acquaintance through thursday rally.. my posting this week.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/08/04/strength-of-faith/

Jacqui Binford-Bell said...

Only be going through it I find but that takes such courage.

I like the structure of this poem because it adds to to the words. It makes the fear palatable.

The Noiseless Cuckooclock said...

love it.
:)

mihirvatsa said...

Poignant, for sure. Glad to have read this one. :)

ASHISH BARDHAN said...

Very Nice Poetry with an amazing Imagination
Great Work of Creativity !! Highly Expressive !!

It was indeed enjoyable after reading this one !!

Anyways, Take a look some of my Poetry Collections …
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/talent-underground/poetry-zone/

some of my Haiku Collections
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and also, on my very recent Work as well
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2011/08/15/india-of-my-dream/

!!! Happy Rally !!!
Cheers !!

Lena said...

Fear has a mighty pull and you've portrayed this dark emotion wonderfully.

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bendedspoon said...

powerful expression. I remember my moments in fear but I don't remember how I exactly lost it. All I know is I want to sleep soundly so I put it aside at night and not pick it up when I wake up. Hopefully when it comes back I won't entertain it for long :)

sillyfrogsusan said...

Fear can consume us if we allow it to...well said!

Larry, aka The Kid and The Old Goat said...

You feel the anxiety.


Larry

Kay said...

You never stand alone. Thank you for your offering.

Sincerely,

Kay

leonargo.com said...

Powerful words... but you are not alone. Listen and harness the voices and stories of people who have broken the clutches of fear, I am not one of them but someday...

Ann LeFlore said...

such a strong poem and the capture of fears. So well done my first rally entry is http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/01/life-memories/