Here I say Hush !!!





This is as quite as it gets
hush down now, says my heart
countenancing all the thoughts to h_h_h_hush......








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12 comments:

Rekha said...

Loved this...the erratic heart now beating at a steady pace as sleep overtakes.

The Fool said...

Nicely written. But from a Haiku standpoint, the syallables seem to be more than 17.

saya said...

@rekha Thanks :)

Jingle said...

creative job.
love love your style.

saya said...

@Jingle Awww thanks for your lovely comment:)

Vinay said...

yes, I agree with TF.. the thought is awesome, Saya, but the syllables do seem more than 17 :)

beccagivens said...

nicely written piece of prose ~~

saya said...

@vinay and the fool Next time will see that I maintain the syllables.

@beccagivens I am glad you like it :)

UmaAnandane said...

The meaning was really nice sandya but as a poet friend I would like to encourage you to correct a little ..cheers girl!

Jingle said...

wow.
stunning...

the link is broken last week, I saw your comment else where, eventually figured out your link, you originally linked in jinglepoetry.blogspot.

thanks for the support.

Jingle Poetry said...

welcome join us again.

will place your link in our blog roll within a week.

super busy these 3 days.

smiles.

A++

saya said...

@uma Thanks for the encouragement.. Will surely do so:)

@Jingle No probs.. Take your time :)