This is as quite as it gets
hush down now, says my heart
countenancing all the thoughts to h_h_h_hush......
Written for:
Here I say Hush !!!
This is as quite as it gets
hush down now, says my heart
countenancing all the thoughts to h_h_h_hush......
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- Saya
- “I found I could say things with Pen and Paper that I couldn't say any other way - things I had no words for.”
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12 comments:
Loved this...the erratic heart now beating at a steady pace as sleep overtakes.
Nicely written. But from a Haiku standpoint, the syallables seem to be more than 17.
@rekha Thanks :)
creative job.
love love your style.
@Jingle Awww thanks for your lovely comment:)
yes, I agree with TF.. the thought is awesome, Saya, but the syllables do seem more than 17 :)
nicely written piece of prose ~~
@vinay and the fool Next time will see that I maintain the syllables.
@beccagivens I am glad you like it :)
The meaning was really nice sandya but as a poet friend I would like to encourage you to correct a little ..cheers girl!
wow.
stunning...
the link is broken last week, I saw your comment else where, eventually figured out your link, you originally linked in jinglepoetry.blogspot.
thanks for the support.
welcome join us again.
will place your link in our blog roll within a week.
super busy these 3 days.
smiles.
A++
@uma Thanks for the encouragement.. Will surely do so:)
@Jingle No probs.. Take your time :)
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